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Is This Love (Lyric) by intheailse

Everytime i see her, I'm on fire, She looks so good, everyime. Is this love? I'm not sure, I've never felt, like this before. It's all you need, someone said...... I think it's my turn, instead. Is this love? Will it show? Sonn enough, I will know.

JackCrawley 29-Mar-03/8:44 AM
Did you just try to rhyme "fire" with "time"? Good Lord.

The only thing worse than a poem that insists on rhyming is a poem that insists on rhyming and fails.




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