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Distant at best (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
WHere in the world has the sanity gone things more stable and able have fallen to angst Is it the water thats poisoned and wrong or the men who refill the tanks? What will they die for with no cross to slash with? more bodies and babies and big macs with coke who will they cling to with no arm to grasp with? Can I scream out and laugh now- one hell of a joke We want we want we strike and flaunt-dysfunctional by design twist and turn in beds that burn remembering our collective mind...

Up the ladder: Ugly
Down the ladder: I am a dream

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 4993
Posted: March 28, 2003 12:16 PM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 12:16 PM PST
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[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 29-Mar-03/7:55 AM | Reply
Huh? If? Wha? Nevermind confused. It seems to make sense to me but something is nagging at me about it. -10-
till I figure out what it is(that could take awhile) :)
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.118.216 | 29-Mar-03/3:32 PM | Reply
Mr. Hand.
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