poemranker ::Distant at best by Crakyamuni

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 45594

Distant at best

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

WHere in the world has the sanity gone things more stable and able have fallen to angst Is it the water thats poisoned and wrong or the men who refill the tanks? What will they die for with no cross to slash with? more bodies and babies and big macs with coke who will they cling to with no arm to grasp with? Can I scream out and laugh now- one hell of a joke We want we want we strike and flaunt-dysfunctional by design twist and turn in beds that burn remembering our collective mind...

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 6.40 weighted 5.17 rank 4990 views 194 View voting details →

5 votes so far. Yours would make 6.5 votes so far

2 comments

[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Mar-03/7:55 AM Reply
Huh? If? Wha? Nevermind confused. It seems to make sense to me but something is nagging at me about it. -10-
till I figure out what it is(that could take awhile) :)
[6] horus8 29-Mar-03/3:32 PM Reply
Mr. Hand.