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Distant at best (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
WHere in the world has the sanity gone
things more stable and able have fallen to angst
Is it the water thats poisoned and wrong
or the men who refill the tanks?
What will they die for with no cross to slash with?
more bodies and babies and big macs with coke
who will they cling to with no arm to grasp with?
Can I scream out and laugh now- one hell of a joke
We want we want we strike and flaunt-dysfunctional by
design
twist and turn in beds that burn
remembering our collective mind...
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 4993
Posted: March 28, 2003 12:16 PM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 12:16 PM PST
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till I figure out what it is(that could take awhile) :)