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Ugly

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Mar 2003 · 5 comments

the beautiful pine trees. covered with frozen water. taking away from their beauty. breathing hard, running fast. the children can see their breath. they don't see the hidden beauty. they see their whole lives. in front of them. naive.

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[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 23-Mar-03/11:58 PM Reply

Wow! Quick style change. I was looking forward to more gore. Or angst. -7-

[n/a] openwounds › thepinkbunnyofdoom 24-Mar-03/12:00 AM Reply

Don't worry - there will be plenty more gore to come .. I can't refrain from writing of those things for long.

[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom › openwounds 24-Mar-03/12:29 AM Reply

Who really can?

[n/a] openwounds › thepinkbunnyofdoom 24-Mar-03/12:48 AM Reply

That would be Blindproject - he/she has lived quite a cookie cutter life and can't really understand - or appreciate - poetry that leans towards the darker side.

[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite 21-Jan-05/12:58 PM Reply

ooh.........this is so good
i love it.......10!
-megan