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Ugly (Free verse) by openwounds

the beautiful pine trees. covered with frozen water. taking away from their beauty. breathing hard, running fast. the children can see their breath. they don't see the hidden beauty. they see their whole lives. in front of them. naive.

openwounds 24-Mar-03/12:00 AM
Don't worry - there will be plenty more gore to come .. I can't refrain from writing of those things for long.




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