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Ugly (Free verse) by openwounds

the beautiful pine trees. covered with frozen water. taking away from their beauty. breathing hard, running fast. the children can see their breath. they don't see the hidden beauty. they see their whole lives. in front of them. naive.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 23-Mar-03/11:58 PM
Wow! Quick style change. I was looking forward to more gore. Or angst. -7-




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