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Distant at best (Free verse) by Crakyamuni

WHere in the world has the sanity gone things more stable and able have fallen to angst Is it the water thats poisoned and wrong or the men who refill the tanks? What will they die for with no cross to slash with? more bodies and babies and big macs with coke who will they cling to with no arm to grasp with? Can I scream out and laugh now- one hell of a joke We want we want we strike and flaunt-dysfunctional by design twist and turn in beds that burn remembering our collective mind...

thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Mar-03/7:55 AM
Huh? If? Wha? Nevermind confused. It seems to make sense to me but something is nagging at me about it. -10-
till I figure out what it is(that could take awhile) :)




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