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Red Skies and Thunderflies (Lyric) by intheailse
There's something i missed, in my red-light thinking, and it's keeping me from sleep. I keep meaning to just let you know, but my tongue gets tied, i hope you know. There's something she missed, in her red-light thinking, and it's keeping her from me. She keeps meaning to just let me know, but her pride is, too much to show. Red skies and thunderflies, is all i've ever needed. There's been something in my eyes.......


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Arithmetic Mean: 5.142857
Weighted score: 5.03842
Overall Rank: 7197
Posted: March 28, 2003 9:46 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 9:46 AM PST
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[7] Fear of Garbage @ 64.56.115.46 | 28-Mar-03/10:07 AM | Reply
this makes a good lyric
[4] spank me baby yeah @ 195.92.194.13 | 28-Mar-03/11:11 AM | Reply
BETTER BUT STILL CACK
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Mar-03/1:51 PM | Reply
The good part must come after the ........ huh?
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 29-Mar-03/7:50 AM | Reply
Alright Lyrics -7-
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