Re: A Student in Descent by EAger to Offend |
23-Jul-03/6:54 PM |
You little rascal. That might explain alot. -10-
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Re: Feasting Ouroboros by <~> |
23-Jul-03/6:59 PM |
Just wondering what does Ouroboros mean? Other than that nice start.
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Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
23-Jul-03/7:11 PM |
Horus, there are very few poems you have ever written that haven't amused me to the point of tears. The idea of you walking door to door selling Avon, is one I couldn't bare. Have a -10- and find yourself some kill. Look on the bright side, free Skin Care!!
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Re: You are a divider by Bachus |
23-Jul-03/7:48 PM |
Something tells me your either pining or lamenting love. Call me crazy, but this doesn't whack me on the head and cause a shitload of thought, and yet I think its very touching. -10-
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Re: Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8 |
25-Jul-03/7:26 AM |
LMMFAOROFL!!!
Worth a -10-
or a young virgin sex slave from black markets of China. The -10- was easier to gift wrap so here.
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Re: Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117 |
25-Jul-03/7:30 AM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Jul-03/7:41 AM |
Fo Risso My Nisso.
Don't change a word. Not One.
Just a nifty little fact I learned awhile ago, but did you know that when they build a white castle, the surrounding property value goes down?
-10-
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Re: CrapBeer by DurtKL |
25-Jul-03/9:38 AM |
I'm gonna have to agree with you on that on Durt. Smirnoff is much better than all those other fuckers. -10-.
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Re: Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117 |
26-Jul-03/11:30 AM |
Awe.. Look at me. I'm so cute, between bars.
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Re: Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8 |
26-Jul-03/12:14 PM |
Wow. How long ago did you write this? Very well written. -10-
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Re: Broken Hearted by thepinkbunnyofdooom |
28-Jul-03/11:32 PM |
LOL. Thanks, You just have a way of making me smile. A 10 just because you spend so much time, investigating my life.
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Re: Ideology for a new era by walrus8 |
28-Jul-03/11:37 PM |
Whats sad is if it wasn't you that wrote this, I'd say I see the poetic meaning here. -8-.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jul-03/11:43 PM |
A classic story, to be told to generations of youth here to come to better inspire them toward decent, proper, party behavior. -9-
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Re: After seven days in the sun by <~> |
29-Jul-03/9:29 AM |
Very, Very, Well Done. This Poem Took some Talent. -10-
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Re: Too obvious by INTRANSIT |
29-Jul-03/9:21 PM |
Acme.. The plague of teenage youth, that apparently never entirely goes away... 10.
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Re: DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
30-Jul-03/12:21 AM |
LOL.
What an Ironing Board.
10.
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Re: The difference between the two -=Dark_Angel=-'s by horus8 |
3-Aug-03/3:18 PM |
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Re: HANDRINOS IS A HUMOURLESS PRIG by walrus8 |
3-Aug-03/3:21 PM |
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Re: American Eden by Don-Quixote |
3-Aug-03/11:59 PM |
Hmmm.. A bit long, the ending was great, try it this way. Lose the ghost stanza, and I think the poet stanza doesn't really fit. Other that I see potential. Both to make something very artistic and to fuck it up. Have fun.
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Re: Angel by abecedarian |
7-Aug-03/1:45 AM |
Wierd, First that the poem right next to this is also entitled Angel, I wonder how often that kinda thing happens and second sex with an angel. I'm sorry I know there are lots of pictures of female angels and things but have you ever read about one in any religious doctrine? I haven't. Just wierd kiddo. Beautiful Imagery and well written in my opinion. Also wrong by those standards but whatever. -9-.
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