| Re: Playa been caught in their games. (revised/new) by LuckyJoe |
10-Aug-03/4:00 PM |
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I would add a penny and a monkey named Lenny, Spruce.
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| Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
10-Aug-03/2:50 PM |
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It's not the first time I've been rejected. I've been rejected everywhere twice. Granted not by huge publishers, or on a top dollar level, but all the same, some very reputable literary mags. I hardly raised a stink about The NFG turn down, and naturally did not incluse Z, she's been nothing but cool to me. The truth of the matter is I detest everything, and will use any subject or opportunity to stretch my craft whether it's you, Mrs. Cornsoul, harper's Bazaroprobono, ticks, rottenfish, soup, murder, pollen, Voyeurism, Bochilism, Niggers, triggers, bats, rats, mom, dad, murder, Elton John. It doesn't matter. I'll attack anything randomly, or defend something whole heartedly, but when i'm provoked I have trouble stopping, until the deal is closed. Nine inch nailed, over, kaput, finet. For christ sake I write about smurfs, prostitution, and abandonment? Don't confuse me typing out a few small comments to mean I'm in some kind of denial? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. WHY! WHY? SWEET LORD CAN'T I SCORE A GIG AHHHHHHHHHHHHH. DIE YOU NFG DOGS DIEEEEEEEE! HOW DARE YOU DENY MY TRITE GASSY ATTEMPTS AT CONVEYING MY LOVE FOR THE WORLD through verse ARGH, OH LORD, THE PAIN IS ALL AROUND. I better go burn a spoon and pick up my old lady at the chicken shack buy my son back from the pawn shop, and call it quits. THANKS P AND K! I NEED A LOT OF LUCK, and a cold hockeye puck for my failure to give a... Yep, poetry, wow, it's infinitely appliable everywhere. I feel like jack fucking Coolstow, in a glass bottomed ass wagon a drift on the Mediajew Sea. But lord knows I have hope, i mean dope. Did you know that in Reno there is a school called Swope? Weird... Jus weird wild stuff.
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| Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
10-Aug-03/2:26 PM |
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That was really cool Da, thanks, I needed that.
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| Re: a comment on Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer |
10-Aug-03/12:02 PM |
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That's shooting for Uranus in a craft built currently for the moon, but a righteous goal none the less even if it's completely unfeasable.
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| Re: Angel by abecedarian |
6-Aug-03/4:32 PM |
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Due to my condition. I must request you stop with this nonsense about cherubian intervention immediately.
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| Re: The Belgian Bookworm [revised] by DreamerSupreme |
6-Aug-03/4:30 PM |
"of ice colliding with glass
in that grapy ocean" I would consider rewording this with an emphasis on losing grapy and ocean.
"Your face would be in a book
as you slowly ate.
Michael Crichton, Dick Francis,
Clive Cussler, and Tom Clancy-
Just a few of your favorite authors
in your large library." Hee he, you are a riot! yes, the library... Sounds stocked from rafters to sagging bottom shelf with such power hitters as Sidney Sheldon and Dean Koontz with a dash of Ken Folliet. You are too cute.
Great title.
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| Re: letting off angry emotions by LosT SykoPath |
5-Aug-03/10:36 PM |
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Murder is for the brave, knaive.
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| Re: Palm Field Park by SupremeDreamer |
5-Aug-03/10:06 PM |
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| Re: Summer by MaliqaTara |
5-Aug-03/1:52 PM |
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This is such a great poem.
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| Re: Popularity by Ditchamal |
5-Aug-03/12:45 PM |
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| Re: Joe is Dead Now by Freethinker1602 |
5-Aug-03/11:56 AM |
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Seems like a cleaner edit.
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| Re: A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
5-Aug-03/11:52 AM |
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Your first statement is powerful, you need to have her with eyebrows and fourteen or twelve toes by the end, or you'll story will die, worthless. Once again your first line sets the pace, so deliver the goods that's what we're interested in. Why, How, who, where, we know when and who you are already, you mentioned ghost town so get there man.
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| Re: He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) by scitz |
5-Aug-03/11:47 AM |
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"His girlfriend left him for some guy who could drive," Quite possibly the funniest line imaginable. But if you destroy the Angel, I'll have nothing to do?
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| Re: ooohhh...subs by Myte342 |
4-Aug-03/9:51 PM |
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You're an obvious "Lap snorkel".
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| Re: a comment on Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Aug-03/8:45 PM |
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Ha ha! You didn't even read the poem you twat... Ha, ha ha ha...
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| Re: Fish by http://findingwater |
4-Aug-03/7:50 PM |
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Ha ha... So did my date. Her chest smelled of the Sea. Her trap of fish.
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| Re: Rainbows and fountains (pillow fights) by http://findingwater |
4-Aug-03/7:32 PM |
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Did you get knocked the fuck out?
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| Re: a comment on A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote |
4-Aug-03/6:06 PM |
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If you google you will find it... If not it gets no freer than the public library
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| Re: a comment on Return to Darkness... by loneshadow29 |
4-Aug-03/6:03 PM |
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Would that said language be the language of love?
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| Re: a comment on A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote |
3-Aug-03/11:58 PM |
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Very good, now you're thinking. You will find that Manly P. Hall wrote an essay on the subject you might find very interesting. Then we may delve all that you wish. But my friend, rest in knowing you do have one, along with one of your parents, as do I.
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