Free verse № 59372
Palm Field Park
Laughter rolls off a child's tongue
in the park of wind blown palms.
It radiates into the air
and travels to my ears.
The sound sparks memories
of my empty youth;
where racking sobs and tears
replaced the unrestrained expression
of joy that this child enjoys.
I follow the trail of this sonance
to be welcomed with the sight
of the toddler's mother
embracing him in a wild spin
that lifts his small body
high into the sky.
I smile at this scene, praying
that the present path of their life
never runs off track.
5 comments
And your 'empty youth' sounds a little adolescent indulgent
A little cliche'd but sweet.
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