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Palm Field Park (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
Laughter rolls off a child's tongue
in the park of wind blown palms.
It radiates into the air
and travels to my ears.
The sound sparks memories
of my empty youth;
where racking sobs and tears
replaced the unrestrained expression
of joy that this child enjoys.
I follow the trail of this sonance
to be welcomed with the sight
of the toddler's mother
embracing him in a wild spin
that lifts his small body
high into the sky.
I smile at this scene, praying
that the present path of their life
never runs off track.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1271
Posted: August 5, 2003 1:57 AM PDT; Last modified: August 5, 2003 1:57 AM PDT
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