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Rainbows and fountains (pillow fights)

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Aug 2003 · 2 comments

The house remains a spectator. Windows dark like opaque sea-depths. Rustic red building on a hill. The pond spouts a lovely Sunday and splits the flat, disturbing the stillness, expelling from geyser-side to center. Nothing breaks the white, but, from the vantage of a traveller; yellow, orange, red, green, purple, violet, and blue. The rainbow in the ‘pillow fight’ (momentarily)from an askew view. -for Sula

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[8] http://mulberryfairy 4-Aug-03/6:13 PM Reply
Can you really see the blue, violet, AND purple of the spectrum?
[7] Shardik 4-Aug-03/7:32 PM Reply
Did you get knocked the fuck out?