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Rainbows and fountains (pillow fights) (Free verse) by http://findingwater
The house remains a spectator. Windows dark like opaque sea-depths. Rustic red building on a hill. The pond spouts a lovely Sunday and splits the flat, disturbing the stillness, expelling from geyser-side to center. Nothing breaks the white, but, from the vantage of a traveller; yellow, orange, red, green, purple, violet, and blue. The rainbow in the ‘pillow fight’ (momentarily)from an askew view. -for Sula

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7595
Posted: August 4, 2003 6:05 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 6:05 PM PDT
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[8] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.66 | 4-Aug-03/6:13 PM | Reply
Can you really see the blue, violet, AND purple of the spectrum?
[7] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Aug-03/7:32 PM | Reply
Did you get knocked the fuck out?
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