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Rainbows and fountains (pillow fights) (Free verse) by http://findingwater
The house
remains a spectator.
Windows
dark like opaque
sea-depths.
Rustic red building
on a
hill.
The pond
spouts a lovely
Sunday
and splits the flat,
disturbing the
stillness, expelling from geyser-side
to center.
Nothing breaks the white,
but, from the vantage
of a traveller;
yellow, orange,
red, green,
purple,
violet, and blue.
The rainbow in the
âpillow fightâ
(momentarily)from an
askew view.
-for Sula
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Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7598
Posted: August 4, 2003 6:05 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 6:05 PM PDT
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