Re: The Uraeus (title by horus) by Y2kSlamPoet	20-Sep-03/11:52 AM
Nicely done.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Sep-03/11:54 AM
Man boobs are trendy.
Re: Janine (a set of haikus) by capachijim	20-Sep-03/11:57 AM
It's good, but it aint that good. 7.
Re: Spider Meth Adventure by Y2kSlamPoet	20-Sep-03/12:29 PM
Don't take his anti drug propaganda to heart young one. Even Ashcroft likes a cocaine enima once in a while. the problem with dark angel and drugs is simple, notice. Wheelchair no sexlife __________ X ____________ = A BAD TRIP constipation Mechanical charisma Could you imagine? Da, (in mechanical voice tripping balls) -- Waht are you staring at? 7-11 guy -- (hindu voice) pardon me please? Da-- I said what are you staring at towel head, quit looking at me like you want to buff my spokes, or clean my trachianomy tube vishnu, DAMN YOU. (he hits the button to activate his evacuation harness) Hindu #2 -- That gross fucking mechanical dolly enbrowned my freshly waxed an sealed linoleum. I hate 4x4 with harnesses an angels, especially when they are stoned.
Re: Junk by Bonehiss	22-Sep-03/6:33 PM
A lovely consideration.
Re: Deceit by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	30-Sep-03/5:13 PM
I simply adore the way you blatantly ponder the relevance in defining style. That, and my honey fetish allowed me to vote high for this regardless of the style spanking pieces.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/3:17 PM
It's amazing what me you and Da come up with in our free time. Last night I found some lint in my neighbors Timothy Hutton (navelator)
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/3:19 PM
What? Ha ha ha. What? Talk about stringing some words together in an interesting way? But this isn't poetry it's Alphabet poop.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/3:28 PM
[_] AABB rhyming scheme [_] About drugs [_] About romantic love [_] About writing [_] About suicide or self-mutilation [X_] About the author's social pastimes [X_] Arbitrary indentation [X_] Arbitrary line breaks [_] Autobiographical but written in the third person [X_] Clerical errors [_] Clichéd imagery (gazing out of window, tears falling like rain) [_] Clichéd rhymes (love/above, heart/apart) [_] Clichéd angst words (putrid, wretched) [X_] Devoid of rhyme [_] Devoid of other linguistic embellishments (alliteration, onomatopoeia) [_] Devoid of other literary devices (simile, synaesthesia) [_] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery [X_] Ellipses used overabundantly [X] Insipidly whimsical or zany [_] Internet shorthand or emoticons [_] Leaving rant [X_] Lower case only [_] 'Lyrics' [X_] Melodramatic [_] Naively religious or superstitious [_] Obsessed with femininity [X_] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Rage against the machine [_] Repetition of a word or phrase to the point of nausea [_X] Sanctimonious [_] Self-obsessed [_] Sentimental [_] Smugly-named protagonist [XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX to infinity] Thesaurophilia [_] Untitled [_] Vicarious wish fulfilment SP
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/4:34 PM
Talk about yawn, fuck, this is a coma.
Re: Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Oct-03/2:17 PM
I most often make myself laugh the hardest.
Re: Under Blood Oak by horus8	3-Oct-03/2:18 PM
A sad bitter leif Garret
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-03/2:53 PM
Titles pliz. So that I might wipe my pooky with it's fine binding spine.
Re: Ghost of Gloaming by Don-Quixote	7-Oct-03/10:21 PM
A dastardly piece of factual trivia, bravo. 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Oct-03/10:25 PM
ha ha ha... more like an earth cracking roar! A six 6, I'm sorry but I've seen you avoid cliches much better than this sack of drowning puppys.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Oct-03/10:26 PM
I did like the last line, and I will give you that it made me laugh jovial and all.
Re: Why You All Suck by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	7-Oct-03/10:44 PM
A serious piece of serious pieces 10
Re: SIR FRASER by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	7-Oct-03/10:55 PM
almost.8
Re: silent struggle by princesszoe	7-Oct-03/11:05 PM
hoochie coo. 8.
Re: My Instructions or My Tongue In My Cheek? by Patsy	7-Oct-03/11:49 PM
An excellent assemblage of words.