Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

20 most recent comments by Shardik (201-220)

Re: Midnight Delight (a sexual sequal) by crims0ngh0st 10-Oct-03/5:35 PM
An opera of teenage hormonal implamentation. A warm cup of boob juice with a dash of bat pee and a smattering of worm hair. 10!
Re: Your Smile by ARTIE 10-Oct-03/5:37 PM
Like a bent uncut penis doing it's dirty work in my colon.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Oct-03/5:38 PM
ha haa ha ah aaa. i'm sorry, but you should write comedy. you're really good.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Oct-03/5:39 PM
This isn't poetry. It's barely a warm journal entry.
Re: bitch by kthulah 10-Oct-03/5:41 PM
A case of internal chicken pox and no bus fare.
Re: Conquered Innocence by muted_screams 10-Oct-03/5:44 PM
Self masturbation on an elementary level.
Re: living room by elmundo 10-Oct-03/5:45 PM
Sounds more like the pantry.
Re: Their Eyes by venusdemilo 10-Oct-03/5:46 PM
Wow, that's an original thought.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Oct-03/5:48 PM
Great promise, but in need of an edit and more buffing for the clarity behind the notion.
Re: Acquaintance by NeeMan 10-Oct-03/5:49 PM
Seriously not bad.
Re: Laxity by Ketiak 10-Oct-03/5:53 PM
Basic training.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Oct-03/5:55 PM
Good god you are a sad case. get over it, it's horribly boring and nothing new.
Re: The Baby Sponge by ruella 10-Oct-03/6:06 PM
And what of the purple bruised urchin when it comes lurchin into a yard full of Sod!!!!
Re: The Censor by Corey McHattan 10-Oct-03/6:06 PM
That, and puppy fucking.
Re: Where are my Spectacles? by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 10-Oct-03/6:13 PM
Up your arse?
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Oct-03/12:37 PM
Often, I will wallow in the stench of my own gas. I'll protect myself and nostril flare me a force field of sheer french fried will.
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Oct-03/1:00 PM
mewl.
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Oct-03/1:02 PM
Clang clan clonk bonk clink rattle thaboing.
Re: September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361 19-Oct-03/1:40 PM
Bleu... I firmly agree with your sound stance on these most serious of subjects. I know first hand the tribulations and suffering that compounds one's ability to deal with reality while in the grips of denial. See, last week, my baboon came down with ebola Bleu, and the economy of my third world island? Collapsed, not to mention my poor perfect 90 year old grandmother is not perfect anymore since she caught aids from a botched hair transplant. Bleu, you are a poet and wise to fight the system so. You are a super trooper young man. A super! trooper. I however am drunk and moments away from being shot in front of a firing squad for squandering my peoples assets and fornicating with their livestock and sons and daughters. Forgive me Bleu.
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Oct-03/11:55 PM
One of your best.


Next 20 Top Previous 20




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001