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Acquaintance (Free verse) by NeeMan
Weaving minds lead to gleaming souls intact from questioning our freedom or the relative irrelevance of our time space paradigms; mind space holograms. Illusions faded crisply into new realms to explore with you who makes me humble in my way of listening to what the cosmos has to say; soul-soft clay. eclectic. Sharing thoughts protect open minds from believing in worldly things and indoctrination of the masses full of lies; within glass tubes. Falseness disappearing through your happiness that shines on me and takes us to the next level where we should be so much more careful; more playful. electric.

Up the ladder: Just Passing Through
Down the ladder: The Way It Should Be

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7565
Posted: July 14, 2002 11:58 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2002 11:58 PM PDT
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[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Jul-02/12:26 AM | Reply
I'm diggin your no-menclature. I'm gonna go read your other two and see what they doo
[7] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Oct-03/5:49 PM | Reply
Seriously not bad.
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