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Acquaintance (Free verse) by NeeMan
Weaving minds lead to gleaming souls
intact from questioning our freedom
or the relative irrelevance of our time
space paradigms; mind space holograms.
Illusions faded crisply into new realms
to explore with you who makes me
humble in my way of listening to what
the cosmos has to say; soul-soft clay.
eclectic.
Sharing thoughts protect open minds
from believing in worldly things
and indoctrination of the masses
full of lies; within glass tubes.
Falseness disappearing through your happiness
that shines on me and takes us
to the next level where we should be
so much more careful; more playful.
electric.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7568
Posted: July 14, 2002 11:58 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2002 11:58 PM PDT
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