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The Way It Should Be (Free verse) by venusdemilo
As the sun comes over the horizon
And I feel your hair on my face
I remember why I missed you...us
The security and familiarity
The love and joy
Being away from you
Was the worst kind of torture
Worse that being burnt, cut, or kicked
For my pain was on the inside
Hidden from everyone but me
I felt it, it sank me
And the world went on... without me
But that was then
So long ago but fresh in my mind
As I'm sure it will be for a long time
But you're here, and I'm here, together...
The way it should be.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7569
Posted: July 15, 2002 8:41 PM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 8:41 PM PDT
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