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Acquaintance (Free verse) by NeeMan

Weaving minds lead to gleaming souls intact from questioning our freedom or the relative irrelevance of our time space paradigms; mind space holograms. Illusions faded crisply into new realms to explore with you who makes me humble in my way of listening to what the cosmos has to say; soul-soft clay. eclectic. Sharing thoughts protect open minds from believing in worldly things and indoctrination of the masses full of lies; within glass tubes. Falseness disappearing through your happiness that shines on me and takes us to the next level where we should be so much more careful; more playful. electric.

horus8 15-Jul-02/12:26 AM
I'm diggin your no-menclature. I'm gonna go read your other two and see what they doo




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