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Midnight Delight (a sexual sequal) (Free verse) by crims0ngh0st
In the darkness of the night Outside with only the moon for light Naked in this darkest hour Looking there in a mirror of mine My pale skin glistening wet Freshly showered, freshly shaved Lust in my eyes I stare deep in them Needing to know what I feel like Wanting to indulge wild pleasures Biting my lip I reach down.... Mmm ... my legs so soft and silky Pale in the moonlight Chilled and shivering just near midnight My lovely arms, so willing, so free My hands through which my words leave me All naked still in this glistening night The moon overhead seems like my own spotlight. My pale body stretched out on the grass Lying here alone in the darkness Cupping my breasts So heavy in my hands Taunting me, Squeezing me. Grasping the black ropes in my hands Wrapping around my outstretched body Binding my chest with these dark lashings Knots everywhere Tightly bound I smile at my work Looking down to see me Protruding now larger than life Held firmly by these loving ties Nipples straining tight in their hold Further around me this black rope wraps Crossing my lovely form I grab at myself, my most treasured place So smooth, so fresh and warm Just feeling the softness makes my desires grow And fingers find their mark As hard as I can I love myself I rip and tear at my body Silent screams roar through my mind Low moans escape my mouth In the darkness of the night I find my way to pleasure Laying on the grass in the dark The cold air on my naked skin Every sense is awakened Every feeling like fire Left only to lay there and stare My mirror image still dancing in the night Finding her own hidden pleasures.

Up the ladder: Smaller
Down the ladder: the child that never was

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.296296
Weighted score: 4.298036
Overall Rank: 13129
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST
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[5] nentwined @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
hmm. trying to conceptualize how you've tied yourself. I've never considered self-bondage. This is a lot of words for a simple masturbation -- a lot of stuff is repeated that doesn't really need to be, I think (though any given part would have its own troupe of fetishists, I'm sure). Hmm. I think if it had more focus than simply masturbation, it would be a stronger poem.
[5] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ | 12-May-02/2:35 PM | Reply
I think you need to refer to night and moonlight more.
[0]... anonymous @ 204.245.176.100 | 17-May-02/8:54 AM | Reply
i'm so glad you know how to get yourself off. .... add a few more details and submit this to Forum. As poetry? This sucks.
[2] deleted user @ 192.11.223.116 | 12-Jul-02/4:00 PM | Reply
Points off for mis-spelling in the title.
[5] Red_is_life @ 212.219.59.126 | 15-Jul-02/3:02 AM | Reply
Too lond and quite boring to read cut out unnecessary parts to make it more readable.
[10] Sigh'ense... @ 66.214.7.233 | 9-Aug-02/4:04 AM | Reply
If you published this on greeting cards they'd have to be marked with a WARNING: very sexy label
[10] Sigh'ense... @ 66.214.7.233 | 9-Aug-02/4:04 AM | Reply
If you published this on greeting cards they'd have to be marked with a WARNING: VERY SEXYlabel
[10] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Oct-03/5:35 PM | Reply
An opera of teenage hormonal implamentation. A warm cup of boob juice with a dash of bat pee and a smattering of worm hair. 10!
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