nentwined16 Mar 2002

hmm. trying to conceptualize how you've tied yourself. I've never considered self-bondage. This is a lot of words for a simple masturbation -- a lot of stuff is repeated that doesn't really need to be, I think (though any given part would have its own troupe of fetishists, I'm sure). Hmm. I think if it had more focus than simply masturbation, it would be a stronger poem.