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Laxity (Free verse) by Ketiak Crumble, mumble, grumble.
Stood before
a ball,
an overgrown marble.
It can roll for ages,
if restraint from
interference
maintains.
Unintelligible
groans are poor excuses for
scat singing
in the bathroom.
Da da di du da da,
di du di da da du da
*FLUSH*
Crumble, mumble, grumble.
The ball misfires,
hits the heel and
bounce
away.
Moon pigeons are
attracted to rumbling
bodily noises.
Claw it and forget.
Di di di dalap do di da da.
Dip dip dup
Up the ladder:
Water Red
Down the ladder:
You Were There
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Posted: July 9, 2002 7:46 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 7:46 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.462117 Overall Rank: 12860 Comments:
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23-Jul-02/9:18 AM
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very odd, this poem about constepation.
Basic training.
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