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Ghost of Gloaming (Free verse) by Don-Quixote
Shadow Dancer, my feelings of you used to flow to and fro, like the tide of the black sea. But these irksome days I've enjoyed the howling during the gloaming, and your whimpering come dawn. Its good to know that there are souls more wretched than my own.

Up the ladder: Spring Wind
Down the ladder: The Bus

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5384
Posted: October 6, 2003 11:17 AM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2003 11:17 AM PDT
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Comments:
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.105 | 6-Oct-03/2:24 PM | Reply
sexual halloween.
[n/a] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.170.8 > INTRANSIT | 6-Oct-03/3:42 PM | Reply
i didnt like my ending, but i had nothing else in my bag that felt right.
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 6-Oct-03/10:20 PM | Reply
You just wanted to say "gloaming".
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.175.60 > deleted user | 7-Oct-03/11:37 PM | Reply
yeah, maybe i did, SO, SO??

YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH IT?
[10] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-Oct-03/10:21 PM | Reply
A dastardly piece of factual trivia, bravo. 10.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.175.60 > Shardik | 7-Oct-03/11:38 PM | Reply
dastardly? how so?
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