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Ghost of Gloaming

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Oct 2003 · 6 comments

Shadow Dancer, my feelings of you used to flow to and fro, like the tide of the black sea. But these irksome days I've enjoyed the howling during the gloaming, and your whimpering come dawn. Its good to know that there are souls more wretched than my own.

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[9] INTRANSIT 6-Oct-03/2:24 PM Reply
sexual halloween.
[n/a] Don-Quixote › INTRANSIT 6-Oct-03/3:42 PM Reply
i didnt like my ending, but i had nothing else in my bag that felt right.
[n/a] deleted user 6-Oct-03/10:20 PM Reply
You just wanted to say "gloaming".
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › deleted user 7-Oct-03/11:37 PM Reply
yeah, maybe i did, SO, SO??

YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH IT?
[10] Shardik 7-Oct-03/10:21 PM Reply
A dastardly piece of factual trivia, bravo. 10.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › Shardik 7-Oct-03/11:38 PM Reply
dastardly? how so?