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Spring Wind (Ode) by William Delacroix
i had never known true beauty until i saw her. her olive skin, hair and
eyes impenetrably black. the moment we first met, spring wind crawled
across my skin, simultaneously stimulating every nerve (/organ/) of my
body.
i needed her like a simile needs a conjunction. i took her to a place
where no one could follow us, a place where fantasies (/nightmares/)
become reality. the scent of her hair and the taste of her skin (/sex/)
were all that mattered.
i have never made love to (/raped/) anyone comparable to her. my flesh
ached with desire and longing, but she was mine; she gave herself to me.
as i tasted her nectars (/sweat/tears/saliva/blood/), the wind coursed
through me.
she stays here now, never needing to leave (/no escape/chains/binding).
from time to time i visit her, run my fingers across her silky
smoothness. she is still as young (/tight/) as ever; time does not move
forward in this place.
i think i too will stay here for awhile (/fuck her/anally/til she bleeds/
). the wind is so warm; her words (/stop/don't/it hurts/help/) are more
beautiful than any music, the sounds flowers would make if they could
speak as they bloomed.
when i slide myself (/ram my cock/) inside her, the wind carries her (/
to orgasm/whether she likes it or not/), and the gentle warmth of my
love fills her (/i shoot my load in her ass/). my spring wind is
perpetual. it will never die.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5384
Posted: September 15, 2003 6:46 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2003 6:46 PM PDT
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