on A Dream Awakened by impaired
12 Sep 2002, 7:36 PM
Impaired, if couples could have relationships like this, there'd be no divorce.
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
12 Sep 2002, 7:27 PM
What do you know, Zzin, I don't like PAKI, either. 'Twas brillig...' My son can recite that entire poem by heart, scary. And...I'm not mad at you, PAKI; your very common brand of empty vitriol simply doesn't rate or raise a rankle with me, and thus, is beneath my contempt.
on Like and Unlike by Christof
12 Sep 2002, 7:14 PM
I like your poetry, Christof. Not sure I understand 'unknown dully', though. How about 'as a moth's wing'? I think of a butterfly's wing as being colourful, not mottled. I reread your poems, dood.
replying on Reflected, Dreamed by Frass
12 Sep 2002, 9:03 AM
I like you, royalflesh.
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 10:01 PM
Come on, Zzin, call him PAKI like the rest of us do. As to your question, I just think it could be a little shorter and tighter; will get back to a quality edit; but, now it's 12:53am in the Commonwealth of Virginia and I must retire.
replying on A missing puzzle piece. by trev086
11 Sep 2002, 9:56 PM
I prefer to refer to 'raw poetry', where even the most pathetically pedantic should be able to separate wheat from chaff.
on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 9:12 PM
You do the blue poetry so well. Make every word count; you're so close.
on A missing puzzle piece. by trev086
11 Sep 2002, 9:04 PM
Thanks for writing something on this issue, Trev; you've got more guts than I do. What is the addition to our heart?
replying on 22nd Anniversary by Frass
11 Sep 2002, 8:39 PM
I'm glad this got your mojo working, mojo. Strongly influenced by 'Poem in October' by D. Thomas.
replying on Russian Roulette by <~>
9 Sep 2002, 10:07 PM
Ya know, PAKI, as repellent as you are, quality analysis such as this makes me like you, just a little. Keep it up and always focus on the golden triangle (1.61803, ya know.....Do ya?).
replying on Russian Roulette by <~>
9 Sep 2002, 9:51 PM
Having lived on three continents as an Air Force brat, I've met a lot of wild and wacky folks; guess I should still be willing to look behind the cracks of a smile, though. BTW; my band's outstanding; we open for local psychobilly ravers 'Top Dead Center' at a private party next week and perform at Ben's BBQ in Manassas Sept. 22 and Oct. 31. Come on down; you will not be bounced and will have your pick of strange people to chat with.
replying on Russian Roulette by <~>
9 Sep 2002, 9:43 PM
Now just hang on one cotten picken' minute; those last two weren't quite cooked...that's supposed to be 'smiles that quiver with selfdoubt'. And it does scare me; makes me question whether I've got the depth of character to absorb their pain or shame or hate or madness.
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
9 Sep 2002, 9:26 PM
Misogynistic pap.
on Russian Roulette by <~>
9 Sep 2002, 9:23 PM
The tragedy and harrowing experience reflected here saddens the reader; but, the quality of your writing provides energizing redemption. 'Crazy, maybe... but surely kind' certainly reminds me of people I've known.
on The Seasons, Changes by Frass
5 Sep 2002, 8:38 PM
You must be a Brit, Dylm/DA, like Anagram says. Is wittering like 'whinging about'? Avon is the easternmost and far flungest away from civilization outpost of sandy, sealsalty natural beauty on the simply s'wonderful Outer Banks of North Carolina. Although I won't be driving that far, I am spending the weekend in Virginia Beach, where I'll be riding the new (to me) '01 Gary Fisher Joshua F4 I just nabbed for a song this afternoon.
on Z higher of arts by ==Doylum
2 Sep 2002, 8:18 PM
Thanks for the reference, Dylm, I'll share this sextuplet limerick with my grandchildren. Although sifting through your emissions on this site to find something mildly diverting is akin to groping around at midnight in a shit bog, I do like the first two lines of the fourth limerick which end with beauty and cutie.
on Hypocrites by PawnedTidal
1 Sep 2002, 8:31 PM
Who are these savage, hypocrital betrayers? My interest is peaked; tell me.