Re: 18 by mikejedw	13-Jan-03/9:43 AM
chilly. very nicely done!
Re: I gots me a postcard, motherfucker. by <{Baba^Yaga}>	13-Jan-03/9:45 AM
certainly unique.
Re: Another Day by Brighteyes	13-Jan-03/9:53 AM
sounds troubled--like a therapy poem. I hope you are feeling better, but you should keep therapy poems to yourself--too often thet sound exactly like this and come across as trite.
Re: strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub	13-Jan-03/9:55 AM
nicely done. solid 9.
Re: Rose Wall by Carvaceous	13-Jan-03/9:57 AM
they won't grow. they're made of paint, you silly goose! (just kidding) a valliant attempt! an 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jan-03/9:58 AM
I can't wait until you publish--let me know when you do so I can buy your book.
Re: a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub	13-Jan-03/10:01 AM
I like the first half a lot.
Re: RAP MASTER by UAFANTHORPEY	13-Jan-03/11:36 AM
general inconsistent tone.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jan-03/11:38 AM
supremely different. Bravo.
Re: Little Tounge by Figure 8	14-Jan-03/7:48 AM
what is a "tounge"? according to www.dictionary.com, the closest word is "lounge". but I guess if you are "licking" with it, perhaps it is a tongue. Even so, this "sing-song" thing here is of little merit.
Re: unbroken by roses are read	15-Jan-03/7:47 AM
rhyme scheme A+ line length A+ rhythm C (inconsistent stresses) meaning B Grade - 8
Re: I did not have sexual relations with that woman by scitz	24-Feb-03/6:03 AM
perhaps cum and go?
Re: On The First Night by OneFingerAnswer	24-Feb-03/6:04 AM
Nice, but seems to lack anything concrete or precise.
Re: He put a price on her head by Nanshe	24-Feb-03/6:06 AM
just buggy.
Re: Suicidal thoughts by CrAzYlAdY Surukain	24-Feb-03/6:07 AM
Don't do it. You need to stick around to write more poetry.
Re: Suicidal Thoughts #2 by CrAzYlAdY Surukain	24-Feb-03/6:10 AM
It is not worth it. Pull yourself out of your funk. Eat some chocolate, watch a comedy, go for a walk or a run--even if it is cold outside (especially if its cold outside) then write some more poems.
Re: Grouchy Smurf (in limerick) by Bachus	3-Mar-03/5:29 AM
most likely all of the above. 8 grins.
Re: For those who play with shit by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Mar-03/5:31 AM
I was doing fine until you made fun of bacon. it is my breakfast meat of choice, and it is not gay. however, the last is the best.
Re: Jack by MuDvAyNe	3-Mar-03/5:33 AM
shame on you. this is all over the web, and was even a joke of the day from www.geocities.com/steve_lynchuk/jokes.html ((you earn a ZERO!))
Re: ship by Sh|t?	3-Mar-03/5:35 AM
as weak as an old man's bladder.