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Sonnet № 36173

unbroken

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

I have tried to be beautiful and strong. I have watched roses bloom into glory. I have tried so hard to sing out my song- All I do is get lost in a story. In truth the roses have become my dreams, They are innocence sweet and na?ve sex, They are passion love, this is me she screams This is me regression of y on x. They say watch it grow as the poppy blooms There I am and I need to get away, I try to walk singing ani's song loom And you hold me back with words you don't say. There is something new in the unspoken, Makes me feel a little more unbroken.

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[8] hipster flare 15-Jan-03/7:47 AM Reply
rhyme scheme A+
line length A+
rhythm C (inconsistent stresses)
meaning B
Grade - 8
[8] horus8 15-Aug-03/12:47 AM Reply
Good, but it could use an edit. 8.