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unbroken (Sonnet) by roses are read
I have tried to be beautiful and strong.
I have watched roses bloom into glory.
I have tried so hard to sing out my song-
All I do is get lost in a story.
In truth the roses have become my dreams,
They are innocence sweet and na?ve sex,
They are passion love, this is me she screams
This is me regression of y on x.
They say watch it grow as the poppy blooms
There I am and I need to get away,
I try to walk singing ani's song loom
And you hold me back with words you don't say.
There is something new in the unspoken,
Makes me feel a little more unbroken.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.888889
Weighted score: 5.9444447
Overall Rank: 1374
Posted: January 15, 2003 7:02 AM PST; Last modified: January 15, 2003 7:02 AM PST
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line length A+
rhythm C (inconsistent stresses)
meaning B
Grade - 8