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Life's Ballet (Free verse) by THE GOD OF DEATH
Her beginning blossoms
With bright curiosity,
And love is an airy, fleeting glance
As she dances with arched steps
To bouncing melodies.
Her organic beauty
Glides along the dewy grasses,
Smelling sweet of the days
When life has broken stillness.
Slowly, her spark of vitality flares,
Flowering into insatiable passion.
Her youth is realized,
Kissing lightly by age.
Given a hand to dance along,
She embraces the steady rhythm,
Hazed by stale heat,
Choked with calm laziness
Under blazing lights
Heavy with potential?s burden,
Smothered in inky silence.
As her vitality wanes, ebbing away,
Her tune becomes lethargic.
She has come of age.
There is work to be done
And endings are sharp, cold.
Her still bones, no longer supple,
Snap jointed pops
As nipped harvest awakens,
Peeking its slivered eye across
A blanket of crystalline down
While bones crack in the chill--
Fires laid by crumpled paper-hands
To start their fog-breathed beginnings.
Then quiet reigns
After the gunshot of the first snap,
Introducing the tumbling first notes
To begin their rhythmic, static cadence,
Rousing the slumbering aged,
Who had ached with vitality so long ago.
The small fluting notes,
Thin in timbre as they whistle, ice
Dry bones chilling them to dust.
And minus the varied measures
With slighted steps of ghosts,
Silence blankets her dance
Until once more, the curtain rises,
The orchestra plays its splashing notes,
And the dancer lights upon arched steppes.
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Overall Rank: 1375
Posted: March 8, 2003 1:53 AM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2003 1:53 AM PST
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