He put a price on her head

by Nanshe

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Feb 2003 · Edited 23 Feb 2003 · 9 comments

veiled, diaphanous ichthyus undulating: large feeders, ten cents.

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[8] hipster flare 24-Feb-03/6:06 AM Reply

just buggy.

[8] razorgrin 24-Feb-03/1:06 PM Reply

cool.

[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Feb-03/3:55 PM Reply

That's pretty good. I was expecting shit. What kind of fish do you have? I have a snow flake eel and a parrot fish they are loads of fun. WAIT... you have an ichthyusaurus in the [pool and your old lady's skinny dipping dressed up as a HAREM GIRL THAT YOU PURCHAESED FOR A DIME BACK IN COLLEGE when you learned the word diaphanous, yes friend this is a sad and common them. i'm going skiing. see you.

[n/a] Nanshe › <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Feb-03/4:19 PM Reply

I have an low-maintenance gold fish or 2 (Hannibal, and soon-to-be-eaten-so-i-don't-have-a-name-for-a-month-or-two).
And a bumble bee catfish.
One of my goldfish (H) is 4 years old, and regularly eats his tank-mates, excepting Bee. Thus the name. Not sure of the gender, but following the mythic tradition, I ascribe him a penis.

[n/a] dmzoacan › <{Baba^Yaga}> 25-Feb-03/4:23 AM Reply

I have a diabetic sole :~(

[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Feb-03/5:04 PM Reply

i went and checked my dictionary, and this became much funnier, here's an upgrade. 9.

[n/a] Nanshe › <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Feb-03/5:14 PM Reply

Many thanks, honollabre suhl.

[8] god'swife 24-Feb-03/9:20 PM Reply

Good structure, nice surprise. Usually I have a problem with diaphanous, overused poetry word, but works well here.

[n/a] dmzoacan › god'swife 25-Feb-03/4:24 AM Reply

"Usually I have a problem with diaphanous, overused poetry word" I'm not sure how true this is, but it is indescribably sad anyway.