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He put a price on her head (Haiku) by Nanshe veiled, diaphanous
ichthyus undulating:
large feeders, ten cents.
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Posted: February 23, 2003 9:25 PM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2003 9:26 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.5555553 Overall Rank: 2456 Comments:
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hipster flare @ 209.68.66.137
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24-Feb-03/6:06 AM
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just buggy.
cool.
That's pretty good. I was expecting shit. What kind of fish do you have? I have a snow flake eel and a parrot fish they are loads of fun. WAIT... you have an ichthyusaurus in the [pool and your old lady's skinny dipping dressed up as a HAREM GIRL THAT YOU PURCHAESED FOR A DIME BACK IN COLLEGE when you learned the word diaphanous, yes friend this is a sad and common them. i'm going skiing. see you.
I have an low-maintenance gold fish or 2 (Hannibal, and soon-to-be-eaten-so-i-don't-have-a-name-
And a bumble bee catfish. One of my goldfish (H) is 4 years old, and regularly eats his tank-mates, excepting Bee. Thus the name. Not sure of the gender, but following the mythic tradition, I ascribe him a penis.
I have a diabetic sole :~(
i went and checked my dictionary, and this became much funnier, here's an upgrade. 9.
Many thanks, honollabre suhl.
Good structure, nice surprise. Usually I have a problem with diaphanous, overused poetry word, but works well here.
"Usually I have a problem with diaphanous, overused poetry word" I'm not sure how true this is, but it is indescribably sad anyway.
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