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Anatomy (Free verse) by Jimbo
Anatomy
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take my eyes as they cry
burning with acid tears
running down the cheeks of my face
i have seen too much
for one person to see
visions of which i cannot forget
i had watched as men, women and children
of all races die before my eyes
i need not see anymore
take them and use them
i would sooner be blind
~
take my ears they are useless to me
i heard the curses and loud noises
now my ears are aching with sounds i hate
they ooze with the pain of words
and swell with redness
at the sounds of silence
that my past had been
~
take my nose the smell of death
wedged in my nostrils
where fire once exited
and i breathed the rot of bodies
i do not need my nose
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take my tongue
it burns with the distaste
of dreams past
rats have nibbled upon the tip
of my tongue
making words so hard to speak
no more can i taste the beauty
that life had to offer
just bitterness
as it rests upon my pallette
teeth that have no roots
being pulled from the precious
jaws that held them tight
i know a tree with no roots
cannot live very long
take my fingers from my hands
they have held instruments of death
now they are senseless to touch
what i had touched in the past
is gone . . . now turned to dust
my fingers hurt with pain
bursting at the knuckles
where fists were once clenched
with rage
cuts and bruised now useless
but for the words they write
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take my memory away from me
it has no more space
it is full of waste as toxic as my tears
my brain cannot forget
cluttered with past dreams
that have bursted before my swollen eyes
the cortex is burning through to my spine
a future for me now left behind
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my senses have dulled
the brain has swelled
eyes that could have witnessed beauty
have failed me
ears that once heard the lovely sounds
of music so sweet
are of no use once they have turned mute
aromas that had filled my breath
again the smell of death
touch me with your fingers
feel my flesh as it turns so cold
i cannot feel anymore
squeeze me
and remove my breath
take me to a resting place . . .
i belong no more
~~
Tlb
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.111111
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Overall Rank: 2457
Posted: March 6, 2003 3:40 PM PST; Last modified: March 6, 2003 3:40 PM PST
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