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Her Smile's Salvation (Sonnet) by Win I take but one false step and I lose all
Fortune deserts me, Happiness beguiles
And left alone to make my stand or fall
I struggle 'gainst cruel Fate and all its wiles
For Destiny is not mine to control
And Life's a road that goes I know not where
Night comes, and darkness falls upon my soul
Yet just when I would sink into despair,
Her eyes like sunshine turn my night to day
Her voice is sweetness, innocent and true
Her touch brings comfort, all my fears allay
Her kiss is rapture, pure and ever-new
Just when I need her most, she comes to me
Her smile's salvation and it sets me free
Up the ladder:
Anatomy
Down the ladder:
AND A NICE CUP OF CHAR
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.111111
Posted: June 11, 2003 8:52 PM PDT; Last modified: June 11, 2003 8:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.5555553 Overall Rank: 2458 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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12-Jun-03/9:39 AM
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God, I lost the feeling in my legs reading that... wait a minute? I don't even have legs. ARGHHHHHHH.
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Win @ 64.52.193.200
> horus8
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12-Jun-03/9:53 AM
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Yeah, it's kind of a rip-off of Shakespeare's well-known 29th sonnet. Just felt like trying a different style.
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