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He put a price on her head (Haiku) by Nanshe

veiled, diaphanous ichthyus undulating: large feeders, ten cents.

god'swife 24-Feb-03/9:20 PM
Good structure, nice surprise. Usually I have a problem with diaphanous, overused poetry word, but works well here.




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