| Re: Shit happens by Bobjim the II |
8-Jan-03/9:40 AM |
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| Re: Shit happens by Bobjim the II |
8-Jan-03/9:42 AM |
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| Re: Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom |
8-Jan-03/9:44 AM |
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at's almost sad, but the "spring has spring" soiunds cliche or sing-songy, taking away from a mood that might surface from underneath.
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8-Jan-03/9:45 AM |
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| Re: The Politics of Fashion by bondjedi |
8-Jan-03/9:46 AM |
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nobody watches that anyways.
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8-Jan-03/9:47 AM |
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I ghot a later one of this series before this. I think they should've been posted as a series of haiku on one post.
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| Re: Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
8-Jan-03/9:48 AM |
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Are you my cousin? we should get married. I suspect the only thing truly molested here is the art from of Haiku.
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| Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom |
8-Jan-03/9:49 AM |
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| Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom |
8-Jan-03/9:50 AM |
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groovy. a bit wordy for a haiku, eh?
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8-Jan-03/9:52 AM |
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| Re: Haiku for Mum by waltfreakinwhitman |
8-Jan-03/9:53 AM |
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planning on being "born again" are we? how christian of you!
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| Re: The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar |
8-Jan-03/9:56 AM |
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| Re: Little Miss Muff by Spider-Man |
13-Jan-03/9:26 AM |
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I am terminally confused. What exactly does it mean to hae "pulled"? It seems like it may be something sinister and remarkably Andrew Dice Clay oriented. I cannot give this a high score.
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13-Jan-03/9:28 AM |
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I like it on many levels--it seems to speak to days i've had. Bravo. a 9.
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| Re: haiku 1 by Crakyamuni |
13-Jan-03/9:30 AM |
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intersting commentary. I like how it feels like a game of pick-up sticks--powerful words thrown together--touching each other with a mix of order and chaos.
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13-Jan-03/9:32 AM |
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there is a sadness here that permeates the sarcasm. nicely done.
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13-Jan-03/9:36 AM |
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mimickry may have been seen as high flattery to Elvis--but of course he wore a white studded jumpsuit and did a lot of drugs. Perhaps this was an attempt at respect for -=Dark Angel=-, bvut I think you've failed, and now you look like a fat guy in a jumpsuit with a mullet and sideburns.
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| Re: not even soup by <~> |
13-Jan-03/9:38 AM |
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sent to bed with no dinner, eh? staring out the window? this speaks to me that way. nicely done!
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| Re: Nature's Artistry by Quarton |
13-Jan-03/9:40 AM |
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Consider it a clash of styles, but it seems like you've used a lot of words to say very little.
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| Re: When she beats me by Win |
13-Jan-03/9:42 AM |
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decnt poem, could possibly use more concise images.
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