regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jan-03/9:15 AM
where is novermber? Northen Germany or Switzerland? I can never remember.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jan-03/9:16 AM
Fascinating. I'm not old, but I bathe. So I can relate to this.
Re: #17 by mikejedw	8-Jan-03/9:18 AM
"detracts" seems awkward. perhaps something more sinister?
Re: storm by unknown	8-Jan-03/9:20 AM
----- ---,-,--. The tornado screamed.
Re: infection of birth by T'ien	8-Jan-03/9:22 AM
to eat to drink to be merry... "Beer is proof that God Loves Man" - Ben Franklin that guy in the Green Mile was infected with life, too. the words are nice, but perhaps this "haiku" should've been infected with line breaks. Stiil I give it an 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jan-03/9:25 AM
I didn't know they made sex beans, much ledd pre-sex beans. I knew they made mexican jumping beans. imagine combining those two! What a lover you might make then!
Re: The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit	8-Jan-03/9:29 AM
nothing personal, but I always belive that the word "just" is unnecessary in most writing. every word should count.
Re: that time my friend slipped me a speedball by unknown	8-Jan-03/9:32 AM
FanTAStic alliteration.
Re: Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom	8-Jan-03/9:33 AM
how cold. excellent.
Re: and the professor, too by bondjedi	8-Jan-03/9:40 AM
5-7-7? why not throw in the gorilla or the astronaut, too? I was listening to mu coconut radio the other day and I heard this song about a chicken and a ostrich in love. It may have been country western--they are like that somethimes. anyways, I was trying to get rescued by reversing the radio signal on my radio and I broke it, getting coconut cream all over my shorts. Thabnks alot for reminding me to take my shorts to the lagoon for a washing. Nice Hat. Why didn't THEIR clothes ever rip or get dirty? I'm just glad I have a coconut computer. Perhaps "lovey and her man" for the last line would be better, however shamelessly unpoetic.