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Free verse № 35887

Little Tounge

by Figure 8

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Jan 2003 · 8 comments

I had a little tounge, I kept it in my mouth. One day I opened up too wide, And licked the roof off the house.

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[3] hipster flare 14-Jan-03/7:48 AM Reply
what is a "tounge"? according to www.dictionary.com, the closest word is "lounge". but I guess if you are "licking" with it, perhaps it is a tongue. Even so, this "sing-song" thing here is of little merit.
[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos › hipster flare 14-Jan-03/10:35 AM Reply
lol. The concept's strong though.t
[10] horus8 27-Feb-04/3:36 PM Reply
radical
[8] zodiac 27-Feb-04/5:15 PM Reply
Tongue.
[10] horus8 › zodiac 27-Feb-04/5:18 PM Reply
Dude, that was the one thing I liked about this? lol.
[8] zodiac › horus8 27-Feb-04/6:46 PM Reply
Only because you misread the title as "Tittie Lounge".
[10] horus8 › zodiac 28-Feb-04/1:33 AM Reply
Huh, good point.
[7] Shuushin 28-Feb-04/7:35 AM Reply
rename it with someting to do with fire and you'll almost have something.

or a dragon. and add another stanza.

btw, "mouth" (as you spell it) should be "muthge"