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Little Tounge (Free verse) by Figure 8 I had a little tounge,
I kept it in my mouth.
One day I opened up too wide,
And licked the roof off the house.
Up the ladder:
"By your side"
Down the ladder:
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Posted: January 14, 2003 7:15 AM PST; Last modified: January 14, 2003 7:15 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.2241178 Overall Rank: 4262 Comments:
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hipster flare @ 209.68.98.119
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14-Jan-03/7:48 AM
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what is a "tounge"? according to www.dictionary.com, the closest word is "lounge". but I guess if you are "licking" with it, perhaps it is a tongue. Even so, this "sing-song" thing here is of little merit.
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Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154
> hipster flare
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14-Jan-03/10:35 AM
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lol. The concept's strong though.t
radical
Tongue.
Dude, that was the one thing I liked about this? lol.
Only because you misread the title as "Tittie Lounge".
Huh, good point.
rename it with someting to do with fire and you'll almost have something.
or a dragon. and add another stanza. btw, "mouth" (as you spell it) should be "muthge" 111 view(s)
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