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Little Tounge (Free verse) by Figure 8

I had a little tounge, I kept it in my mouth. One day I opened up too wide, And licked the roof off the house.

Shuushin 28-Feb-04/7:35 AM
rename it with someting to do with fire and you'll almost have something.

or a dragon. and add another stanza.

btw, "mouth" (as you spell it) should be "muthge"





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