on The Ode that never was by Shardik
24 Jan 2003, 11:01 PM
I demand that you tell me immediately who told you about the pirgayte LeChoadke? DAMN IT MAN...SPEAK! you obviously are trained at the art of poetry! and should be forced to dance 'the prawne shuffle'. _e_t_e bastard! i know that's you come out..ye..plagiarist..you stole my lyr....... cockeyed vandal.
replying on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8
24 Jan 2003, 10:51 PM
Thanks,
Here is the edited version
Masking Wyverns
Watch me slave at words I could never say
Monsoon shark god furious
The love of my father, she snaked away
Wind swept waves bled 'til Sunday
It?s a shame I am that curious
Watch me slave at words I could never say
Fierce night howls paved the way
And the way it was deleterious
The love of my father, she snaked away
Children raced past our well-lit display
An unintentional metamorphosis
Watch me slave at words I could never say
A raven-haired woman asked, "was I okay?"
Lips crimson and voluptuous
The love of my father, she snaked away
A god of wind, a shark at play
Your past is not mysterious
Watch me slave at words I could never say
The love of my father, she snaked away.
because i know how you are about spelling
Here is the edited version
Masking Wyverns
Watch me slave at words I could never say
Monsoon shark god furious
The love of my father, she snaked away
Wind swept waves bled 'til Sunday
It?s a shame I am that curious
Watch me slave at words I could never say
Fierce night howls paved the way
And the way it was deleterious
The love of my father, she snaked away
Children raced past our well-lit display
An unintentional metamorphosis
Watch me slave at words I could never say
A raven-haired woman asked, "was I okay?"
Lips crimson and voluptuous
The love of my father, she snaked away
A god of wind, a shark at play
Your past is not mysterious
Watch me slave at words I could never say
The love of my father, she snaked away.
because i know how you are about spelling
on mornings, january by <~>
24 Jan 2003, 2:37 PM
chew it until thawed at work.
on The Other Side of Me by Quarton
24 Jan 2003, 1:37 AM
J.D. Salinger.
replying on The Ode that never was by Shardik
23 Jan 2003, 1:18 PM
ha ha ha.
replying on Hinged by Imperfections
23 Jan 2003, 1:16 PM
lol.
on nothing less by corinacorrie
23 Jan 2003, 2:03 AM
But....Are you good looking?
replying on Jesus was a necromancer by horus8
23 Jan 2003, 12:15 AM
jerky boys, second album.
First was way better.
First was way better.
replying on The plains of Africa by horus8
22 Jan 2003, 11:52 PM
It would if this had anything to do with Africa.
on The Crutchling by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
22 Jan 2003, 8:44 PM
silver.
on Beyond Imagination by vulcan
22 Jan 2003, 7:56 PM
i am going to feature your poetry tonight on my show me thinks.
on Maya by Reuben Spiteri
22 Jan 2003, 7:49 PM
this is by far the worst poem i've read of yours, sorry...6f
on Bottom by ThoughtfulSoul
22 Jan 2003, 7:47 PM
Have no fear..it's only a black out while eating at mcdonalds, feel that...there there...hold my mcnuggets.
on It's something about you by devina
22 Jan 2003, 7:42 PM
you always love the people that hate you the most. by the way..did you see where my frisbee landed?J
on Creativity. by Blue Magpie
22 Jan 2003, 7:38 PM
The sole is a mysterious thing, but i feel that you have described it's 'meaningful' secrets properly.lol.?
on Remembering You by dalva
22 Jan 2003, 7:35 PM
Ralph, is that you?*
on Thy Lovely Eyes by dalva
22 Jan 2003, 7:28 PM
well it at least maintains a strong notion.