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Thy Lovely Eyes (Free verse) by dalva
I was powerless to look away. . . not even for a moment. The vision of her deep dark eyes. . . was forever etched in my mind. Her lovely gaze penetrated my soul. . . igniting emotions that I was afraid to expose. Even when my eyes closed. . . her enchanting stare was still there. Every time I looked into her sweet soulful eyes. . . the desire to reveal my true feelings grew. I must find a way to bare my heart and soul. . . so she can know how much her lovely eyes mean to me.

Up the ladder: Seen from a train
Down the ladder: The pretty girls

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4615383
Weighted score: 5.337412
Overall Rank: 3440
Posted: October 7, 2002 5:38 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 5:38 AM PDT
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[7] deleted user @ 195.93.33.7 | 3-Nov-02/7:01 AM | Reply
Thats sweet :)
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Jan-03/7:28 PM | Reply
well it at least maintains a strong notion.
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