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Thy Lovely Eyes (Free verse) by dalva
I was powerless to look away. . .
not even for a moment.
The vision of her deep dark eyes. . .
was forever etched in my mind.
Her lovely gaze penetrated my soul. . .
igniting emotions that I was afraid to expose.
Even when my eyes closed. . .
her enchanting stare was still there.
Every time I looked into her sweet soulful eyes. . .
the desire to reveal my true feelings grew.
I must find a way to bare my heart and soul. . .
so she can know how much her lovely eyes mean to me.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4615383
Weighted score: 5.337412
Overall Rank: 3440
Posted: October 7, 2002 5:38 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 5:38 AM PDT
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