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Remembering You (Free verse) by dalva
There are only a few memories in our lives
that we will never forget. Some are sad
and painful. . . others are of great joy. You
my lady are one of the few that I hold so
dear and so near to my heart. I thought I
knew what it meant to feel alive... to
experience life and the many great wonders
it has. But from the moment I saw you,
when my eyes met yours, when I heard your
soft voice speak to me. . . I knew then that my
life would take on a whole new meaning.
From your kind and gentle ways, to the soft
and subtle inner beauty that emits from
your lovely being I was never going to be
the same. I'm forever changed because you my
dear have eclipsed my heart. Every time I
look at a sunset, whenever I gaze at the
stars, everything I do, and even in my
dreams the cherished memory of you will
never fade away from me.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5555556
Weighted score: 4.2777777
Overall Rank: 13159
Posted: October 7, 2002 5:35 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 5:35 AM PDT
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