Free verse № 19136

Maya

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

Holy water at a lake Cleaning all evil stains Creating Spiritual Energy Running through my veins Moonlight pouring from the sky Cooling the heat of Delusion Until we become one Beating the forces of Illusion Music pouring from the sky Activating my Divine brain Destroying all doubts That drives man insane Flowers shining in the sand When lost giving me hope Following their smell Taking me to the Divine road

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[10] vulcan 8-Oct-02/12:25 AM Reply

Vow!you are a Poet!10000000000000

[3] Bachus 8-Oct-02/12:27 PM Reply

hephaestus obviously is the the crab whisper from your crotch...more smoke and mirror tom foolery..you might be able to trick these easilly swooned demigods, but your going to hafta dig a little deeper for us mantel sturgeons. we have four legs but herman hesse borrowed our third leg last yesterday. didn't he. early like the worm bird..

[6] horus8 22-Jan-03/7:49 PM Reply

this is by far the worst poem i've read of yours, sorry...6f