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Maya (Free verse) by Reuben Spiteri

Holy water at a lake Cleaning all evil stains Creating Spiritual Energy Running through my veins Moonlight pouring from the sky Cooling the heat of Delusion Until we become one Beating the forces of Illusion Music pouring from the sky Activating my Divine brain Destroying all doubts That drives man insane Flowers shining in the sand When lost giving me hope Following their smell Taking me to the Divine road

horus8 22-Jan-03/7:49 PM
this is by far the worst poem i've read of yours, sorry...6f




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