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you first time in my sight (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil
you first time in my sight
set me ringing like bells
filled every bend and channel
of the sinews and the nerves
that run my skin
in our first words the sound
escaped me, audible under
my speech to you who set it
and you turned your head
to catch it.
not long and we were
racing the street
the locked church towers left us
kicking cars for their alarms
and pressing every door's
buzzer, they answered
to our laughter
i found in our collapse
into each other,
in the quiet of the room,
a high pure sound seeped
from your skin.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7504
Posted: May 11, 2002 3:18 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 3:18 AM PDT
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