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nothing less (Free verse) by corinacorrie
i never want to see you leave
to return to the darkness without your smile
back to my sad thoughts
and you alone
when the night has ended
time comes to steal you away
all i can do is wait
until i see you again
until i win my war with time
i hate to see you ever go
walk into the cold and lonely night
to cast a shadow on your face
and leave you alone
for that initial moment
the dark hides your toughts
and the silence leaves a frightening void
until i hear your voice again
until you speak of a time
it seems i can never win
i am waiting
i am hurried
only to be waiting again
i never want to leave your side
the warmth of your voice
and the embrace of your smile
my world stops when i'm with you
if only time would too
it seems i can't win
it seems we can't win
until i see you again
until i lose my fight with time
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11876
Posted: January 22, 2003 3:58 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2003 3:58 PM PST
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