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bounce (Free verse) by corinacorrie
you're my night and day my every move and thought found in my eyes etched into my heart you're my reason to wake my only reason to dream beneath the depth of conciousness my beauty exposed you're too good to be true a scene out of my dream you're the reason i care the reason i fall so hard.

Up the ladder: nothing less
Down the ladder: Toxic & Water

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11872
Posted: January 22, 2003 3:59 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2003 3:59 PM PST
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[7] thavimatola @ 209.94.133.143 | 28-Sep-03/10:25 PM | Reply
80% of the stuff here is worse...
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