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The Other Side of Me (Free verse) by Quarton
I knew a man,
a sweet talker whose busy lips
formed honey-coated words
of much charm and wit;
resembling a candidate.
A tempter who could speak
without debate,
his opinions most convincingly.
How he would talk--on and on
incessantly,
as women gossip over tea,
with fabricated sincerity.
Only a facade reflected--
erected for others to see.
But inside, hidden from view,
lived a recluse wishing
to live in anonymity.
His other self
who would not reveal
thoughts or dreams,
nor words that stood in truth
upon that which he believed--
in secrecy conceived.
We each share a dual side,
an unknown state
residing deep inside, where
neurons croon a separate tune.
A life that lives inside a mind;
the esoteric--private kind,
impervious to scrutiny.
I am the one unseen,
not who I pretend to be--
the cryptic other side of me.
My real life led--inside my head,
in self-imposed obscurity.
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Weighted score: 6.7
Overall Rank: 514
Posted: January 23, 2003 9:49 PM PST; Last modified: January 23, 2003 9:49 PM PST
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and am pleased you liked it. My other side thinks I
revealed too much but he has always been rather paranoid:)