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The Other Side of Me (Free verse) by Quarton

I knew a man, a sweet talker whose busy lips formed honey-coated words of much charm and wit; resembling a candidate. A tempter who could speak without debate, his opinions most convincingly. How he would talk--on and on incessantly, as women gossip over tea, with fabricated sincerity. Only a facade reflected-- erected for others to see. But inside, hidden from view, lived a recluse wishing to live in anonymity. His other self who would not reveal thoughts or dreams, nor words that stood in truth upon that which he believed-- in secrecy conceived. We each share a dual side, an unknown state residing deep inside, where neurons croon a separate tune. A life that lives inside a mind; the esoteric--private kind, impervious to scrutiny. I am the one unseen, not who I pretend to be-- the cryptic other side of me. My real life led--inside my head, in self-imposed obscurity.

Quarton 24-Jan-03/9:08 AM
Well, I'm not sure can. Perhaps I stressed the "mans" verbosity
too much but I did wish to convey strongly his opinionated
side which is not really how he feels and thinks inside.
A tempter whose words are strewn about profusely and give the
apearance of deep felt meaning and conviction where there is
none... .In saying "without debate", I meant beyond rebuttal
or reproach and the irony of his words being untrue to his
other self while being perceived as sincere and genuine by
those he "charms" with "honey-coated words." ....Hope this
helps and I too suspect a melding as one grows older and
more introspective. Thanks for your comments and I may make
some minor changes tho not sure.




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