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It's something about you

by devina

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Oct 2002 · Edited 30 Jan 2004 · 5 comments

I'ts something about you. Something about your eyes, Something about your smile. Something that makes me shiver inside. Something about the way you walk, Something about the way you talk. I never thought that I could feel tis way for anyone again. But you... I don't know what to do. It's just something about you.

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[6] vulcan 8-Oct-02/4:15 AM Reply
good!(schiwwer?Norwegian?=shiver?)
[8] lukehanney 10-Oct-02/2:08 AM Reply
A know a song by the Beatles about Norway (Norwegian Wood...isn't it good). It seems to me that you dislike Miss Tarquin De La Bog (A.K.A Miss Tarquin Del Boy Toilet) would you like to form a sort of allinace against her with me and Nicholas Jones

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[1] Roisin 8-Nov-02/4:22 PM Reply
Riddled with cliche.
[2] horus8 22-Jan-03/7:42 PM Reply
you always love the people that hate you the most. by the way..did you see where my frisbee landed?J
[3] NanceXToo 31-Jan-04/12:03 PM Reply
Way too generic. This could be a Hallmark card. And probably should be.