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It's something about you (Free verse) by devina I'ts something about you.
Something about your eyes,
Something about your smile.
Something that makes me shiver inside.
Something about the way you walk,
Something about the way you talk.
I never thought that I could feel tis way
for anyone again.
But you... I don't know what to do.
It's just something about you.
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An Agenda
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Familiarity
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Posted: October 8, 2002 1:37 AM PDT; Last modified: January 30, 2004 10:40 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9523187 Overall Rank: 8917 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.31
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8-Oct-02/4:15 AM
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good!(schiwwer?Norwegian?=shiver?)
A know a song by the Beatles about Norway (Norwegian Wood...isn't it good). It seems to me that you dislike Miss Tarquin De La Bog (A.K.A Miss Tarquin Del Boy Toilet) would you like to form a sort of allinace against her with me and Nicholas Jones
Write back
Riddled with cliche.
you always love the people that hate you the most. by the way..did you see where my frisbee landed?J
Way too generic. This could be a Hallmark card. And probably should be.
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