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An Agenda (Free verse) by INTRANSIT Armada approaching
Crushing, extracating blue
Crimson and gold scatter
Life, dormant.
Massiveness waiting,swarming cold.
Wetness finishing, furied
whiteness pounding.
Everlasting.
Complete and completed,
pulling back drifters search.
Buried.
Up the ladder:
Narrow Minded People
Down the ladder:
It's something about you
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Posted: October 2, 2002 6:56 AM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2002 6:56 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9523187 Overall Rank: 8916 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.179.137.4
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2-Oct-02/8:44 AM
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I'm gettign lost. "Wetness finishing"? No entiendo?
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.234
> god'swife
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2-Oct-02/9:17 AM
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Definitely inteded. Just think a little, dis be easy for joo mang!
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.234
> INTRANSIT
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2-Oct-02/9:18 AM
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Let's see now... where did I put that "n"?
I think this is a very powerful piece, I fear people do not realize what this verse means.
Well done, you!!!
When you wrote extracating- do you mean
extricating or extracting? The poem is too unclear to me. Whose agenda? What armada? 257 view(s)
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