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Free verse № 18428

An Agenda

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

Armada approaching Crushing, extracating blue Crimson and gold scatter Life, dormant. Massiveness waiting,swarming cold. Wetness finishing, furied whiteness pounding. Everlasting. Complete and completed, pulling back drifters search. Buried.

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[n/a] god'swife 2-Oct-02/8:44 AM Reply
I'm gettign lost. "Wetness finishing"? No entiendo?
[n/a] INTRANSIT › god'swife 2-Oct-02/9:17 AM Reply
Definitely inteded. Just think a little, dis be easy for joo mang!
[n/a] INTRANSIT › INTRANSIT 2-Oct-02/9:18 AM Reply
Let's see now... where did I put that "n"?
[9] AuntyM 3-Oct-02/6:22 PM Reply
I think this is a very powerful piece, I fear people do not realize what this verse means.
Well done, you!!!
[5] Jill Stockinger 1-Jan-21/12:19 PM Reply
When you wrote extracating- do you mean
extricating or extracting?
The poem is too unclear to me. Whose agenda? What armada?