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An Agenda (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Armada approaching Crushing, extracating blue Crimson and gold scatter Life, dormant. Massiveness waiting,swarming cold. Wetness finishing, furied whiteness pounding. Everlasting. Complete and completed, pulling back drifters search. Buried.

Jill Stockinger 1-Jan-21/12:19 PM
When you wrote extracating- do you mean
extricating or extracting?
The poem is too unclear to me. Whose agenda? What armada?




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