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An Agenda (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Armada approaching Crushing, extracating blue Crimson and gold scatter Life, dormant. Massiveness waiting,swarming cold. Wetness finishing, furied whiteness pounding. Everlasting. Complete and completed, pulling back drifters search. Buried.

AuntyM 3-Oct-02/6:22 PM
I think this is a very powerful piece, I fear people do not realize what this verse means.
Well done, you!!!




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