| Re: The death of Bachus by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-Mar-03/3:18 AM |
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NO! horus8 collapses, all the poets are asleep. He pulls his brother to his face and kisses him gently. All good things come to pass. his blanket seems to be the skin of oceans, the flesh of the future. change, stinks up the air with stretch marks. the sun will never weep for isis. again.
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| Re: Desired Height by Wulf |
17-Mar-03/4:25 PM |
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Well, i will say there is some nice wordplay here, but since darwinism is alive and well and definitely going to play a part in this war too. i can only give you a 7, as a scientist, you see. Nothing personal. It's probably seven more then you've ever given me, but i shall not weep (happy hour has arrived).
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| Re: Blue Fuckin' Moon by lastobelus |
17-Mar-03/4:12 PM |
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Beginning's okay, middle starts to shimmy a bit, but then pow. good show, could use a re-edit to get the tens though. here's an 8.
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| Re: The Breathing Dead by Caducus |
17-Mar-03/4:08 PM |
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you might have a too, or a to, crossed, but that's trendy, and kool too.
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| Re: the salt shaker by elizabethann |
17-Mar-03/4:05 PM |
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But can you play the marimba naked?
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| Re: untitled by angel_uy |
17-Mar-03/3:48 PM |
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Sir, how dare ye just give the secret confusion poem formula over like this. You have besmirched your last hoof. The time has come to put our feet down. lol.
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| Re: Tell me I suck by Blindproject217 |
17-Mar-03/3:23 PM |
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Lagniappe, is the word of the week, not suck.
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| Re: Triptych: Rural by lastobelus |
16-Mar-03/3:15 PM |
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| Re: Another Dull Moment by Blindproject217 |
16-Mar-03/3:12 PM |
"The vail is lifted " veil.
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| Re: Digging by WankerPoem |
16-Mar-03/3:01 PM |
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| Re: a comment on squeeze by kthulah |
15-Mar-03/12:19 PM |
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by the way that was the problem with eve too, that's why lilith kicked her ass. Women just can't handle watching other women strut too. Shame really, and it's why their men wonder. We smell those kinds of weak thinking insecurities and use them as an excuse to dabble in another cauldron.
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| Re: a comment on squeeze by kthulah |
15-Mar-03/12:16 PM |
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God's wife obviously is jealous of your seductive form here with this piece. Something which she considers herself good at, but... i like the dark. God and his wife are one directional and boring. Don't listen to her. this is short, sweet and arousing..
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| Re: squeeze by kthulah |
15-Mar-03/12:13 PM |
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What should i bring as a sacrifice? PIG! pork, is the squealmeat of the future. Jews and ragheads just don't get it my dark queen.
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| Re: a comment on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
15-Mar-03/12:09 PM |
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Don't confuse a narcissistic poop fetish while polishing one's wheel chair spokes and maintaining an appropriate blood sugar level with snobbery spank me, Jesus has very little to do with it.
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| Re: A Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo |
15-Mar-03/11:59 AM |
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Even funnier, but the Ghost's of Mars? was a horrible movie, just a complete waste of my last hamster cannon.
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| Re: Return of a Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo |
15-Mar-03/11:56 AM |
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ha ha. someone blue three'd this. shame. i'll give it a 7. some were quite amusing regardless of the fact that you're not really.
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| Re: I'm going back to art school by TanHand |
15-Mar-03/11:52 AM |
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| Re: Hippy's Ode to Eternity by bondjedi |
13-Mar-03/3:19 AM |
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Call it the Dove of doom!
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| Re: Hippy's Ode to Eternity by bondjedi |
13-Mar-03/3:19 AM |
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GQT AWARDE! 10! FUNNY FUNNY stuff. the first line cracked me up. even looking up at it still, makes me laugh. odd really.
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| Re: a comment on Charm by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Mar-03/3:17 AM |
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I forgot a 'you' in there somewhere, sorry, it's damn late. goodnight.
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