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Hippy's Ode to Eternity (Haiku) by bondjedi death cry of the dove
drowned in a sea of oil
peace is so nineties
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Emotionless
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Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS)
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Posted: March 13, 2003 3:03 AM PST; Last modified: March 13, 2003 3:03 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.8 Overall Rank: 1693 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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13-Mar-03/3:19 AM
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GQT AWARDE! 10! FUNNY FUNNY stuff. the first line cracked me up. even looking up at it still, makes me laugh. odd really.
Call it the Dove of doom!
title stinks. first two lines are great. last is lacking.
Fun.
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