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Emotionless (Haiku) by Roisin
Try to pull a poem From this my hardened heart's core It comes out jagged.
Down the ladder: Hippy's Ode to Eternity
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.8
Overall Rank: 1692
Posted: November 6, 2002 10:58 AM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2002 10:58 AM PST
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[8] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 7-Nov-02/4:53 AM | Reply
Nice. You combine the haiku with concrete poetry - the poem is jagged because of the lenght of the middle line.
[10] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.140 | 10-Jun-03/9:18 AM | Reply
nice. very nice.
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