poemranker ::Emotionless by Roisin

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Haiku № 24063

Emotionless

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

Try to pull a poem From this my hardened heart's core It comes out jagged.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 6.60 weighted 5.80 rank 1691 views 188 View voting details →

10 votes so far. Yours would make 11.10 votes so far

2 comments

[8] Nicholas Jones 7-Nov-02/4:53 AM Reply
Nice. You combine the haiku with concrete poetry - the poem is jagged because of the lenght of the middle line.
[10] Robert K Foster 10-Jun-03/9:18 AM Reply
nice. very nice.